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starhunter287

What I see has never been what I see what I feel has never been what I felt what I say has never been what I want to say I am not   in control of my body

i have never felt real

I have never loved

I’ve never felt

i am blank I walk I run I yell I scream

but I never feel

I hear what someone else hears

I am blank

3 thoughts on “blank”

  1. Hi! I think you have a nice premise going on here. It only needs serious development. Why are you blank? What are some situations where the reader can see you “blank”? For example, you could write that you were walking around the other day when you saw a puppy, and you didn’t even flinch. Stuff like that. Make the reader feel what you want them to feel. 🙂

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